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Jake Gyllenhaal Unfinished by ~bullethead:iconbullethead:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Portraits & Figures

©2004-2009 ~bullethead
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In my humble opinion i think i royally fucked this one over. I payed alot of attention to detail and missed the likeness to subject. The eye is straight when it should be slanted and i have done something wrong on the eyebrow. The hair i didnt finish yet, and theirs more on the bottem that the scanner cut off. Made the pupil too large with charcoal and couldnt undo it. Left side of the face is perfect, like the lips, like the lashes, but the smirk on the smile isnt there. Made something wrong on the scale, as he's got some small low features and a big head.

white and superrefined charcoal, 14x17 paper, white eraser, .7 mech pencil

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~Backlyt Dec 7, 2004, 4:33:15 PM
I think your humble opinion sucks. I really think you did a great job, the lips look a little wrong though. maybe too small and shaped weird. a smirk would be nice.

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~bullethead Dec 7, 2004, 4:34:48 PM
i did the shaping right, i dont think i darkened enough to make the right expression show or something...
i dunno. i think my humbleness is honest
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~Backlyt Dec 7, 2004, 4:42:31 PM
humbleness is great, but be aware that there will always be those who try and shatter it.
I dont know why, but the line of the top of the lip looks too pointy

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~bullethead Dec 7, 2004, 4:46:27 PM
huh...yeah, it really does. reletively like the pic thogh.
Im not that humble, im a lier, im actually entirely too full of myself.
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~withak Dec 7, 2004, 4:50:14 PM
:wow: your worng about the likeness, i recognised him instantly. the way you treated the shading is really gorgeous. tones are fantastic. i agree with backlyt on the lips. :clap:
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~bullethead Dec 7, 2004, 4:54:59 PM
thanks alot, karmen. i think he's recognizable, but somethings just wrong in the aspect of it.
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~Assley- Dec 7, 2004, 5:06:28 PM
Oh... my... god. He's is one of my fave actors. I just :heart: him. It looks awesome!! A :+fav: for sure when you're all finished. :D

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~Backlyt Dec 7, 2004, 5:45:29 PM
oh yeah, i love the picture, no doubt.
too full of yourself? stop trying to be humble.

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~anttek Dec 7, 2004, 6:41:47 PM
wow, beautiful work, you didn't fuck it up as bad as you think, heh. it bears a striking resemblence to the man.

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!jundam Dec 7, 2004, 7:09:59 PM
i think you did a great job! i think you got the likeness down and the amount of fine detail is mind-blowing.

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