Jake Gyllenhaal Unfinished

In my humble opinion i think i royally fucked this one over. I payed alot of attention to detail and missed the likeness to subject. The eye is straight when it should be slanted and i have done something wrong on the eyebrow. The hair i didnt finish yet, and theirs more on the bottem that the scanner cut off. Made the pupil too large with charcoal and couldnt undo it. Left side of the face is perfect, like the lips, like the lashes, but the smirk on the smile isnt there. Made something wrong on the scale, as he's got some small low features and a big head.

white and superrefined charcoal, 14x17 paper, white eraser, .7 mech pencil